tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19626113.post1034348163234490827..comments2024-01-13T18:06:33.392+00:00Comments on Fiona Harper: Fearless Finn turns out to be a wussFiona Harperhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12468352083675137996noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19626113.post-1261574655431530912011-03-29T19:30:28.403+01:002011-03-29T19:30:28.403+01:00I think every writer is different. I like to have ...I think every writer is different. I like to have an idea of theme as I write, because I feel it's like deciding where north is for my story compass. Without it I feel directionless. I know other writers who hate to plan anything in advance and are much happier discovering what the story is about as they go along. Whatever fits your process, I say.<br /><br />From my point of view I think you're totally right about wanting that inner journey mapped out before the outer one. That's definitely how I work. I need to have a good idea of the emotional journeys my hero and heroine are going to take before I start to write, and then I construct plot events that push them into making that journey. But, like I said, not everyone works that way, so I'm always a bit wary about being too prescriptive about this stuff.Fiona Harperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12468352083675137996noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19626113.post-1079844956332104242011-03-29T18:07:56.443+01:002011-03-29T18:07:56.443+01:00"I love piecing this stuff together! It's..."I love piecing this stuff together! It's great."<br /><br />Me too :) Off to get a copy of The Moral Premise.<br /><br />Michael Hauge (in a 1989 book 'Writing Screenplays that sell.') reckons you shouldn't begin with a theme but disregard it until you've written at least one draft--that you should develop the plot first (as theme grows out of plot.)<br /><br />Maybe for anyone writing for Harlequin it's the other way round--we need to use our characters' inner motivations and theme to determine the external plot?Janet Chhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14898590854473007918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19626113.post-25222108412099710612011-03-29T15:13:46.738+01:002011-03-29T15:13:46.738+01:00Hi, Cara! Nice to 'see' you again - even i...Hi, Cara! Nice to 'see' you again - even if it's only in the cyber sense.<br /><br />I don't think I've ever blogged in such an in-depth way while I've been writing a book before, but writing about my process is really seeming to help me get to grips with a trickly book.<br /><br />But I have to stress, these are things I find helpful for <i>my</i> process. It's going to resonate with some people and make others scratch their heads or run screaming from the room.Fiona Harperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12468352083675137996noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19626113.post-15007375676278664322011-03-29T13:35:07.776+01:002011-03-29T13:35:07.776+01:00Hi Fiona - really enjoying your posts about charac...Hi Fiona - really enjoying your posts about character and how you go about crafting your novels. I've just finished Three Weddings and a Baby and it was really interesting to hear where the nuggets were for the story that you turned into polished gold. I am fascinated with the different methods authors use so I'm awaiting your next blog post with interest. We met briefly when you did a New Voices talk in Bromley and I scribbled loads of notes, but having it reiterated again, more fully and in particular in reference to a soon to be published book (let's hope they don't give you too many revisions once you get the draft done!) is a real gem. Thank you!Cara Cooperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15972751301677687055noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19626113.post-50960155277362548662011-03-29T12:29:32.224+01:002011-03-29T12:29:32.224+01:00I also think that you can have a hero and heroine ...I also think that you can have a hero and heroine exploring one issue rather than being on opposite sides of it - they just might reflect different aspects of that issue.<br /><br />But in this case, although it seems Finn is free and Allegra is caged, they are both suffering as the result of limitations/restrictions at the beginning of the story, and they will both be experiencing greater freedom at the end of the book. Allegra has the bigger arc in this story, though.Fiona Harperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12468352083675137996noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19626113.post-87450499121913803502011-03-28T22:18:13.765+01:002011-03-28T22:18:13.765+01:00Interesting, Janet! I'm reading Inside Story ...Interesting, Janet! I'm reading Inside Story at the moment too. I've been wanting to understand more about the idea of theme, as I have a feeling it's the glue that holds everything together.<br /><br />Another book that's good on that front is 'The Moral Premise' by Stanley Williams. Quite a lot of what Dara Marks is saying ties into Stanley Williams's ideas and Micheal Hauge's. I love piecing this stuff togehter! It's great.Fiona Harperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12468352083675137996noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19626113.post-19687949503335404392011-03-28T21:59:27.960+01:002011-03-28T21:59:27.960+01:00'Since the whole theme of the book is control/...'Since the whole theme of the book is control/captivity versus freedom...' <br /><br />I'm so glad you mentione theme. I've often wondered about the best way to plan theme in a romance novel. I've been reading about theme in Dara Marks How-to-write book (Inside Story). but what she says seems to seems to apply more to stories with just one main character. For her, the theme of a story seems to be a single word. eg Manhood (Dead Poet's Society)And out of that comes the author's statement/perspective on that theme eg Take control of your lives. (which is also the boys' character arc)<br /><br />But your theme is 2 words. You've taken 2 opposites and given one side to the hero and one to the heroine. Which seems much more suited to a story with 2 main characters. Will each then help the other to get more of a balance in their lives? (So the control person deveops more freedom and vice versa)Janet Chhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14898590854473007918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19626113.post-7395376905887673622011-03-28T20:13:27.583+01:002011-03-28T20:13:27.583+01:00That was one of those things that came to me in a ...That was one of those things that came to me in a mometary flash, Janet. Those are always the best nuggets of insight into my characters - those seemingly random things that pop into my consciousness when I'm doing something other than writing.<br /><br />However, I say "seemingly", because I often think these are the 'fruit' of my digging sessions. If I hadn't done all that thinking the day before/earlier in the day, that little gem might never have floated to the surface.<br /><br />Since the whole theme of the book is control/captivity versus freedom, I wanted to find an area where the free-spirited Finn was also caged in. Allegra couldn't be the only one with issues on that front. Finn's are just less obvious.Fiona Harperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12468352083675137996noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19626113.post-74168232210842125102011-03-28T03:30:43.761+01:002011-03-28T03:30:43.761+01:00Finn sounds fantastic! I can't wait to read h...Finn sounds fantastic! I can't wait to read his story :)Lacey Devlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05716109142743069204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19626113.post-17798535854071128692011-03-27T23:03:42.721+01:002011-03-27T23:03:42.721+01:00"While he despises people who never leave the..."While he despises people who never leave their TV sets, or only do day-trips and package holidays, he is guilty of the same superficiality in his emotional life."<br /><br />This is brilliant!!! I wish I had the psychological knowledge to come up with such insights into my characters.Janet Chhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14898590854473007918noreply@blogger.com